Friday, October 8, 2010

The Hill of Life

I was always with you
Now I'm beside you
Falling with you
Over the hill of life

You were stronger than I
But now I carry you
Lifting you up
Over the hill of life

We're nearing the end
Or are we?
Lost on the long journey
Over the hill of life

I never thought I'd see you
So low, down below me
Churning with an absence of thought
Over the hill of life

You're with me now, ever changing
Bringing upon me thoughts but all lies
Caring not for eternal forgiveness
Lost long about, far away
Over the Hill of Life

17 comments:

  1. wow. you're a really good poet. keep it up. i'm looking forward to the next one!

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  2. this poem was a hill of emotions lol

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  3. Nice poem, been reading lots of blog poems recently, there are some really talented people out there.

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  4. gotta say thats pretty deep. I can actually say some poetry is pretty awesome, which surprises me

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