Friday, October 8, 2010

The Hill of Life

I was always with you
Now I'm beside you
Falling with you
Over the hill of life

You were stronger than I
But now I carry you
Lifting you up
Over the hill of life

We're nearing the end
Or are we?
Lost on the long journey
Over the hill of life

I never thought I'd see you
So low, down below me
Churning with an absence of thought
Over the hill of life

You're with me now, ever changing
Bringing upon me thoughts but all lies
Caring not for eternal forgiveness
Lost long about, far away
Over the Hill of Life
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17 comments:

  1. loveblogginOctober 8, 2010 at 12:56 AM

    great poem

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  2. The Blind ProphetOctober 8, 2010 at 1:21 AM

    I like it. Nice writing! :)

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  3. IglooOctober 8, 2010 at 2:03 AM

    deep. very deep.

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  4. JillDineOctober 8, 2010 at 3:17 AM

    beautiful. love it. <3

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  5. razortekOctober 8, 2010 at 3:43 AM

    cool post bro!!:)

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  6. WillowOctober 8, 2010 at 12:01 PM

    Nice poem!

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  7. killerkunOctober 8, 2010 at 4:49 PM

    wow deep, is it yours??

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  8. DarianOctober 9, 2010 at 12:14 AM

    wow. you're a really good poet. keep it up. i'm looking forward to the next one!

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  9. likethat?October 9, 2010 at 12:19 AM

    this poem was a hill of emotions lol

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  10. tortacularOctober 9, 2010 at 12:38 AM

    gr8 poast!

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  11. Quinn ElectronicsOctober 9, 2010 at 1:14 AM

    good poem, sir

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  12. Toliver EdgeOctober 9, 2010 at 1:15 AM

    Nice poem, been reading lots of blog poems recently, there are some really talented people out there.

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  13. AnonymousOctober 9, 2010 at 1:30 AM

    Awesome! Great work!

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  14. RubixOctober 9, 2010 at 2:42 AM

    wow man, thats awesome

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  15. BromatkoOctober 9, 2010 at 3:14 AM

    gotta say thats pretty deep. I can actually say some poetry is pretty awesome, which surprises me

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  16. AnonymousOctober 9, 2010 at 7:24 PM

    Nice poem man.

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  17. ilikeicecreamOctober 9, 2010 at 11:53 PM

    poem = awesome

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