Friday, May 20, 2011

A Short Thought Poem: "Eye"

I believe that the root of immorality is self-worthlessness. 

I have no worth and thus 

I have no right to be moral. 

Immoral things comfort my body which is worthless. 

It is a self-fulfilling prophesy.

16 comments:

  1. Hate to say it, but it sounds pretty emo and self loathing. Not that I am a poet or anything. <.<

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  2. I believe there is a typo in the first line, or maybe I just don't get the poetry.

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  3. Indeed there was a typo. I didn't even notice.

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  4. I quite like it, i also think its deep.

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  5. This really makes you think, good work

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  6. Really reminds me of my philosophy class I had last semester. As others stated that it does make ya think, and good job on the poem mate.

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  7. ima burn a joint to this and do my thinkin man. real deep stuff man. one love

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  8. Nice little poem, thanks for sharing =)

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  9. Second time reading (and commenting).
    It's that good.
    Post some more.

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  10. Not into poems that much, I used to write some too but they weren't good I guess. it reads nicely though

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