A focus on observing and uncovering the intricacies which make up the universe and the mystery of life.
Hate to say it, but it sounds pretty emo and self loathing. Not that I am a poet or anything. <.<
I believe there is a typo in the first line, or maybe I just don't get the poetry.
Indeed there was a typo. I didn't even notice.
I quite like it, i also think its deep.
Interesting piece of work
This really makes you think, good work
Really reminds me of my philosophy class I had last semester. As others stated that it does make ya think, and good job on the poem mate.
nice poem! :)
ima burn a joint to this and do my thinkin man. real deep stuff man. one love
Nice piece, I like it.
Nice little poem, thanks for sharing =)
Second time reading (and commenting).It's that good.Post some more.
Not into poems that much, I used to write some too but they weren't good I guess. it reads nicely though